tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889917239987497656.post770307759009877484..comments2022-05-29T04:02:57.425-07:00Comments on Mooretoons: "THE RAMBLER" "Slaying Of The High King" - Part One Post TwoBlaxklerichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06986635840718583767noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889917239987497656.post-19130837596869476362017-02-09T14:58:57.464-08:002017-02-09T14:58:57.464-08:00Thanks Bryan, albeit I did change the Rambler'...Thanks Bryan, albeit I did change the Rambler's tie for this particular adventure ;-) This adventure very much follows a tried and tested formula I use for most of my 'historical' stories, so I'll be very interested in hearing your thoughts as the adventure progresses...Blaxklerichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06986635840718583767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889917239987497656.post-57162577525112098402017-02-09T14:26:02.074-08:002017-02-09T14:26:02.074-08:00I like the fact that your two time travellers are ...I like the fact that your two time travellers are wearing the same clothes as when we last saw them in the Himalayas. It does provide a nice piece of continuity. Action is good but I don't mind the wordy scene-setting. It is necessary to get a better sense of who is who and what's going on in this strange new time and place - at least for me it is.Vampifanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11318241813130102121noreply@blogger.com